snakeboy.3062 Posted September 17, 2019 Share Posted September 17, 2019 The way you told this story - that was pretty dang good. It starts off all festive and kind of trivial, and then in a short amount of time you actually manage to set the stage in an interesting and rather subtle way. I thought the ending was really good, and it offset the whole prologue into something epic indeed. And the legion concert: wow. Such a blast. Looking forward to episode 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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