[Video] New let's player/video creator looking for feedback

[TCFactory.1473]

As it says on the tin. I'm new to making videos in general save for a few clumsily edited speedpaints. However one of my freshman classes allows video series/let's plays as project work so I decided to give it a try. I'm not a native speaker and one point of this project is to practice spoken English.

 

**What I plan for the videos:** a playthrough of the path of fire story with some basic guides for the achievements included and just general gameplay of the expansion (heart quests, bounties, mastery and hero point locations, etc.).

 

What I'm looking for really is feedback and constructive criticism on how I could possibly improve on the videos. My personal end goal would be to get to a good enough quality that I could continue making videos after this let's play is over.

 

I thank you in advance for any and all help.

 

https://youtu.be/8K5cbnd6SyA?list=PLhat7oKU_5vVQ43aX_Ny7PsEs9CcW3t2h